Peer Review #6

I decided to review Sibel’s entry in which she wrote a letter as the Scholar Gypsy to her friends at Oxford University.

https://sibelerkansite.wordpress.com/2017/05/06/blog-post-week-8/

Hey Sibel,

Obviously, this is a tad late but I wanted to leave a review of your letter because I think you really captured the character of the Scholar Gypsy. Right from the very start, I get the sense that you believe Oxford is not right for you and that you need to follow your heart, even if it does mean going headfirst into the unknown. I also really liked how you gave clear reasoning to as why you would leave so a University to essentially become a gypsy instead of just ending the letter after saying you were going. It really does give a good sense of realism to the situation. It’s clear that you tapped into your inner Scholar gypsy while writing this and it was a pleasure to read.https://sibelerkansite.wordpress.com/2017/05/06/blog-post-week-8/

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One thought on “Peer Review #6

  1. *Please attend to editing your work carefully. Here is what I have picked up:
    *clear reasoning to as why you = clear reasoning as to why you [word order]
    * would leave so a University = would leave such a University [typo or wrong word choice]

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